Essay Assignment: Money and Success
Essay Score: 4
I think earn lots of money will become a successful people. Everyone has his own objectives. If he can approach his objectives in his life. He will be a successful person.
One of my friends very like computers. He hope he will buy a very powerful computer with a big LCD screen. After he work hard many years, he finally earns enough money to make his wish come true.
My best friends , Tonny , love sports cars such as Lotus. He really love to have one. He work night and day, even the holidays. Now he almost has enough money to buy a Porsche 911.
I love to travel. I wish I can travel around the world after I retire. I have to work hard to save money for it. If I earn enough money after I retire, I can go to travel around the world to make my dream come true. I think this is a success for me.
I think make your wish come true will be a successful person. To make your dream come true needs money. If you can earn a lot of money will make you to be a successful person.